Heart on a sleeve

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Heart on a sleeve

Postby goddessmushu » Tue Feb 21, 2012 10:45 am

Hello Gigglers!

This is my first post and when I saw there was a Homegrown Talent section I thought I'd share a poem I wrote. It's been a while so let me know what you think :)


If wearing my heart on my sleeve is the fashion,
then I guess I'm out of style.
No magazines or catwalk shows,
could make it worth my while.

So I'll lock it in a cotton pocket,
and seal it with a stitch.
Until I find an easy love,
that goes off without a hitch.



It's only short but it's the first thing I've written in years so wanted to start off again relatively simple!

Feedback is appreciated, inc constructive criticism!
Thanks, Mica
The geek will inherit the Earth
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Re: Heart on a sleeve

Postby Talented » Fri Mar 02, 2012 4:29 am

I like it :) Keep writing, 'cause that is really good!
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Re: Heart on a sleeve

Postby louisew » Fri Feb 15, 2013 4:42 pm

That is both clever and heartfelt (no pun intended). You are a gifted writer for sure. I love the word play. Can't wait to hear more!
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