Color in

[mcgrathea]

Let me know how you feel about the line breaks!

I'm coloring in
the colorless
half sleeve
tattoo
he once got by
trading in
his own guitar.
He's borrowed a few acoustics since then
and one electric,
but they never stay in tune
and the strings always stretch
too far
from the fretboard,
leaving blisters.
I color in the
blisters
too.

[abizzle21]

funky. i like

[green like the color]

I really like reading this. It exudes a sense of wistfulness, if that makes sense.