Just a Little Something I wrote

[amanda3]

While cleaning out my desk today I found an old journal. My first entry dated 6/16/09 was a poem. It made me remember how much I enjoy writing and how it makes me feel. Thought I would share this entry with you all and hope someone else will share something they have written!

I found comfort in the sun today
Its warmth wrapped around me
Its rays attached to my back

Was it because you're not here
Unable to wrap your arms around me
Or hold me close to your body

But I found comfort in the sun today
It urged me to move forward
It helped me along the way
Shining down on me and staying all the way

Trying to understand why you couldn't stay
Thinking of how I loved you just the other day

But I found comfort in the sun today
Shining bright enough to guide me through the day
And setting only when I could find my way.

[CelestineV05]

That really blew my socks off

[Ptree82]

That was lovely! Thanks for sharing it with us.

[jess]

I really liked it Than you!
I use to write a lot mainly when i feel heartborken. I haven't written in a long time know... maybe that's a good thing

[jess]

I really liked it Than you!
I use to write a lot mainly when i feel heartborken. I haven't written in a long time know... maybe that's a good thing

[Cyn]

I can already hear this in a song. keep it up!

[anacinforheadaches]

I love this! It totally reminds me of something that would be in a Beatles song.

[mlm6640]

This was awesome! I love it!

[our-eternity]

It's simple and beautiful!